Weekly Writing Challenge: Leave Your Shoes at the Door


Weekly Writing Challenge

The Other Perspective

Seeing perspective is hard
And unkind
We want to return, step back
And rewind

We think things worked as before
No chore
No stress, all smooth, no buckling
High score

So why do you scream and fight
With plight
We two are happy, you just one
Sit tight

Say unfair, then push and pull
No sway
That is the way it is, has been
No foul play

Now you’re leaving, you quit
Break away
You’ve created a problem
You’ve betrayed

Now we are left with it all
You’ve unspun
You exposed our misgivings
All undone

Considering things from a different point of view as been the hardest Weekly Writing
Challenges I have done.

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