What did you do today?
I pushed out the boat
Watched over my shores
Kept possibilities afloat
I swaggered the banner
And raised the tide
Worked through anguish
For our sense of pride
I swept out the doubts
That folded around
Housing cool whispers
Putting fears to ground
April 10, 2015 at 6:06 pm
You paint a vivid image with your words! Your metaphors are lovely and the upbeat tone of the poem is quite motivating π
April 10, 2015 at 6:30 pm
Hey Mara, hello and a big thank you for your comment. I appreciate your feedback very encouraging and very kind words to an unsure, uncertain nervous blogger. So thank you.
April 10, 2015 at 11:29 pm
This has a lovely flow to it. Very nice work.
April 11, 2015 at 2:50 am
Thank you so much π
April 12, 2015 at 7:34 pm
It’s almost like a song – very melodical and with plenty of images to imagine π
April 12, 2015 at 9:56 pm
This is a lovely compliment, I am very grateful for your feedback. Thank you very much
π