Medicinalmeadows

A Days Work…..

6 Comments

What did you do today?
I pushed out the boat
Watched over my shores
Kept possibilities afloat

I swaggered the banner
And raised the tide
Worked through anguish
For our sense of pride

I swept out the doubts
That folded around
Housing cool whispers
Putting fears to ground

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6 thoughts on “A Days Work…..

  1. You paint a vivid image with your words! Your metaphors are lovely and the upbeat tone of the poem is quite motivating πŸ˜‰

  2. This has a lovely flow to it. Very nice work.

  3. It’s almost like a song – very melodical and with plenty of images to imagine πŸ™‚

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